If you could create a new holiday, what would it celebrate and how would people observe it?
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If I could create a new holiday, I would make holidays in July and November.
Because it is no holiday in July and November in Korea.
There are many holiday in October. so I would adjust the holiday schedule, if i could.
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If I could create a new holiday, I would make holidays in July and November.
>> CORRECT
OR >> If I had the chance to create a new holiday, I would introduce holidays in July and November.
Because it is no holiday in July and November in Korea.
>> This is because there are no holidays in July or November in Korea.
There are many holiday in October. so I would adjust the holiday schedule, if i could.
>> There are many holidays in October, so I would adjust the holiday schedule if I could.
OR >> Since October has many holidays, I would revise the holiday schedule if given the opportunity.
>> CORRECT
OR >> If I had the chance to create a new holiday, I would introduce holidays in July and November.
Because it is no holiday in July and November in Korea.
>> This is because there are no holidays in July or November in Korea.
There are many holiday in October. so I would adjust the holiday schedule, if i could.
>> There are many holidays in October, so I would adjust the holiday schedule if I could.
OR >> Since October has many holidays, I would revise the holiday schedule if given the opportunity.
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