If you could create a new holiday, what would it celebrate, and how would people participate?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to make the finish day on 12/31.
It\'s because I hope we celebrate that we study hard on this year.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
Please make your statements more simple and clear.
Direct expression of thoughts is the key.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I want to make the finish day on 12/31.
>> I want to make the last day of the year special.
It\'s because I hope we celebrate that we study hard on this year.
It\'s because I hope we celebrate that we study hard on this year.
>> It\'s because I hope we can celebrate studying hard this year.
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