If you could create a tourism slogan for your country, what would it be?
학생이 쓴 원문
Tourism slogan should be a summarized sentence.
It should remind to people about the country.
So, It could be a powerful slogan.
I\'ll use young and powerful, dynamic image to slogan.
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Tourism slogan should be a summarized sentence.
>> Correct
It should remind to people about the country.
>> It should remind people about the country.
So, It could be a powerful slogan.
>> So, it should be a powerful slogan.
I\'ll use young and powerful, dynamic image to slogan.
>> I\'ll use a young and powerful, dynamic image in the slogan.
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