If you could create your own new season, what would it be like?
학생이 쓴 원문
umm. well if i can create new season, 07:00am to 21:00pm will be sun lighting.
but it shouldn\'t hot.
if sunny day is everyday, many people are get sick off.
so sometimes twice of month must rainy.
and it should be warm and not cold.
but these \"new season\" is impossible.
if these new season is exist, these is a in heaven.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I think you\'re the type of person who likes to wake up late in the morning and spend time outside at night, based on the time you wanted the sun to shine. I think this kind of season would be nice to experience, since having a longer daytime can help us make the most of our day and do more!
- T. Caitlyn
umm. well if i can create new season, 07:00am to 21:00pm will be sun lighting.
>> Well, if I could create a new season, the sun would shine from 7:00 a.m. to 9:00 p.m.
but it shouldn\'t hot.
but it shouldn\'t hot.
>> But it shouldn\'t be hot.
if sunny day is everyday, many people are get sick off.
if sunny day is everyday, many people are get sick off.
>> If it\'s sunny every day, many people might get sick of it.
so sometimes twice of month must rainy.
so sometimes twice of month must rainy.
>> So it should rain about twice a month.
and it should be warm and not cold.
and it should be warm and not cold.
>> CORRECT
but these \"new season\" is impossible.
but these \"new season\" is impossible.
>> But this \"new season\" is impossible.
if these new season is exist, these is a in heaven.
if these new season is exist, these is a in heaven.
>> If this new season existed, it would be heaven.
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