If you could create your own street food, what would it be?

2024-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kristine

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I\'m not very good at cooking, so I\'ve never thought about making street food. Recently, I occasionally cook food for my children at home, but since I don\'t have my own recipes, I mainly watch cooking videos on YouTube and cook accordingly. In the summer, I usually ride my bike and stop by stalls along the river, so if I were to make street food, I would like ro make something cool and thirst-quenching. I used to mainly drink Coke and eat instant ramen and hot dogs at the street stall. If I were to run a stall, I would like to make and serve sikhye, a traditional Korean drink. Therefore, I will learn how to make sikhye from my mother and make it. Also, I would like to ask my mother and learn and make other refreshing traditional Korean foods.

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I\'m not very good at cooking, so I\'ve never thought about making street food.
>> Correct.
Recently, I occasionally cook food for my children at home, but since I don\'t have my own recipes,
>> I\'ve been feeding the children at home on occasion lately, but I don\'t have any original recipes. 
I mainly watch cooking videos on YouTube and cook accordingly.
>> I mostly use YouTube to watch cooking tutorials and adapt my cooking.
In the summer, I usually ride my bike and stop by stalls along the river, 
>> I typically ride my bike and visit the stalls along the river in the summer.
so if I were to make street food, I would like ro make something cool and thirst-quenching.
>> So if I were to create street food, I would rather make something refreshing and hydrating.
I used to mainly drink Coke and eat instant ramen and hot dogs at the street stall.
>> I used to eat hot dogs and instant ramen at the street stand and mostly drink Coke.
If I were to run a stall, I would like to make and serve sikhye, a traditional Korean drink.
>> Sikhye is a traditional Korean drink that I would like to make and serve if I were the owner of a stall.
Therefore, I will learn how to make sikhye from my mother and make it. 
>> Therefore I\'m going to take my mother\'s cooking lessons and prepare sikhye.
Also, I would like to ask my mother and learn and make other refreshing traditional Korean foods.
>> In addition, I would like to ask my mother, study, and prepare more refreshing traditional Korean dishes.

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