If you could design your own park, what would it look like? 😀 👍
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I want to design the park that have cats, trees and river.
I design smile balloon because, I love smile very much.
It so cute!!:)
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If you could design your own park, what would it look like? 😀 👍
I want to design the park that have cats, trees and river.
>> I want to design a park with cats, trees, and a river.
>> I want to design a park with cats, trees, and a river.
I design smile balloon because, I love smile very much.
>> I designed smile balloons because I really love smiles.
OR >> I designed smile balloons because I love smiles very much.
It so cute!!:)>> CORRECT
OR >> It is so cute! :)
Your park looks beautiful! I would love to go there, play with cute cats, and enjoy the river view.
- Elly~^^
Your park looks beautiful! I would love to go there, play with cute cats, and enjoy the river view.
- Elly~^^
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