If you could design your own violin keychain from scratch, what would it look like?
학생이 쓴 원문
Since it is a keychain attached to the violin case, it seems that the violin shape should be present.
And I think it would be better if Beethoven or Mozart, who I like, was holding the violin.
I wish there is something like a ribbon to engrave my name here.
But I don\'t think the size of the keychain should be too big.
강사 첨삭
Hi David! Your writing does a great job of describing your ideal keychain design. Your ideas are clear, and I can see that you have a strong preference for classical music themes. Keep up the great work!
~ T. Lia
Since it is a keychain attached to the violin case, it seems that the violin shape should be present.
>> Since it is a keychain attached to a violin case, it makes sense for it to have a violin shape.
And I think it would be better if Beethoven or Mozart, who I like, was holding the violin.
>> I think it would be even better if Beethoven or Mozart, whom I like, were holding the violin.
I wish there is something like a ribbon to engrave my name here.
>> I wish there were something like a ribbon where I could engrave my name.
But I don\'t think the size of the keychain should be too big.
>> However, I don’t think the keychain should be too large.
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