If you could design your own [이름], what would you put in it?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will put trees and I will put some chairs to sit.
I will also put snackscar so when someone is hungry they can eat something in the car.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sunny!
Your statements are really on point.
They are both direct and expressive.
I also like the examples you gave.
Keep up the good work!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I will put trees and I will put some chairs to sit.
>> I will put some trees and I will put some chairs for people to sit on.
I will also put snackscar so when someone is hungry they can eat something in the car.
I will also put snackscar so when someone is hungry they can eat something in the car.
>> I will also put food trucks so people who feel hungry can eat something.
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