If you could eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be and why?

2020-03-12 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

학생이 쓴 원문

There are a lot of side dishes with rice and soup in Korean\'s meals. We believe that these food make us healthy. Especially, Kimchi is the most representative Korean foods. I can\'t have my meals without it, especially when I eat oily food, kimchi is essential. However, if I could eat only one food, I would select ramen because It is really easy to cook and delicious too. I think ramen is one of the greatest inventions. Actully, I really love eating hot noodles regardless of type. I used to think that food made by flour couldn\'t replace my meal, because I thought that rice is the only one could be meal. If I didn\'t have rice every meal, I felt easily hungry and exhausted because I believed that foods were made by flour don\'t contain enough calories. However, I can eat any food for my meal even if it is bread or hamburger. My perception of food have been changed since I was in the UAE.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday, Mr. [이름]! Thanks for taking the time to write this composition. Talking about food always makes me hungry. 
I hope you had your lunch already, Sir. See you! ^^
~T.Avery
There are a lot of side dishes with rice and soup in Korean\'s meals. 
>> CORRECT
We believe that these food make us healthy. 
>> CORRECT
Especially, Kimchi is the most representative Korean foods. 
>> Especially, Kimchi best represents Korean foods.
I can\'t have my meals without it, especially when I eat oily food, kimchi is essential. 
>> CORRECT
However, if I could eat only one food, I would select ramen because It is really easy to cook and delicious too. 
>> CORRECT
I think ramen is one of the greatest inventions.
>> CORRECT
Actully, I really love eating hot noodles regardless of type. 
>> Actually, I really love eating hot noodles regardless of its type. 
I used to think that food made by flour couldn\'t replace my meal, because I thought that rice is the only one could be meal. 
>> I used to think that food made from flour couldn\'t replace my meal, because I thought that rice is the only meal I could have.
If I didn\'t have rice every meal, I felt easily hungry and exhausted because I believed that foods were made by flour don\'t contain enough calories. 
>> If I didn\'t have rice every meal, I feel easily hungry and exhausted because I believed that foods made from flour don\'t contain enough calories. 
However, I can eat any food for my meal even if it is bread or hamburger. 
>> CORRECT
My perception of food have been changed since I was in the UAE. 
>> My perception of food has been changed since I was in the UAE. 

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