If you could edit your memories, which ones would you erase and why?

2022-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I want to erase the memory that when I was riding the police car. It\'s because when I traveled with my family and cou[이름]s, we stopped by a rest arear and came to the bathroom. but they left me behind. I took a police car, so the cops drove me to the next stop in the police car. :)

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Hi Elic! 

I feel really bad for what happened to you at that time but I\'m also laughing really hard right now. Thanks for sharing this memory of yours. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I want to erase the memory that when I was riding the police car. 
>> If there is a memory that I want to forget, it would be the one where I  rode a police car. 

It\'s because when I traveled with my family and cou[이름]s, we stopped by a rest arear and came to the bathroom. 
>> It\'s because when I traveled with my family and cou[이름]s, we stopped by a rest stop and used the bathroom. 

but they left me behind. 
>> But when I was done, I saw that they left me behind.

I took a police car, so the cops drove me to the next stop in the police car. :)
>>I took a police car, so the cops drove me to the next stop. 

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