If you could eliminate one weakness or limitation in your life, what would it be?

Good day Sir [이름]!

It\'s the middle of the week again. Hihihihi.

I totally agree with you. We should not waste our time hating others or doing nothing.

As you always say in class, \"We should live our life to the fullest\".

We may not always show our love to our family or friends. But we should not forget to tell them.

Thanks for your inspiring composition. ^.^

Teacher Nina

I do not laugh or smile often.

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>> I seldom smile or laugh.

I am not humorous.

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>> I am not a humorous person.

I am a bit serious all the time.

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I’m too strict on myself and others as well.

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A lot of seniors often say that life is short and there is nothing we cannot endure or forgive.

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Our life is a moment and time will come sooner than we had expected to leave the world.

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>> Did you mean: Our life is a moment. And time will come that we have to leave the world.

>> Our life is a moment and sooner than what we had expected have to leave the word

We even have to say good bye to our loved family and friends.

>> We even have to say goodbye to our loved ones.

>> We even have to bid farewell to our family and friends.

We cannot take anything we now have when we die.

>> We can\'t take anything we have now when we die.

Our fortune, social reputation, social status, and achievements will be left behind us.

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For what are we so furious, greedy, and serious?

>> Did you mean: For what are we so furious, greed and serious about?

Life is a picnic.

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>> Better: Life is like a picnic.

We came on a picnic for a short period of time.

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Seventy or eighty years of our life will be just a moment when we look back at the end of our journey.

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It is too short to spend our life only loving our family, colleagues, and friends.

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There is no time to waste our life on hating someone or being upset at something.

>> There is no time to waste our life on hating someone or being upset about something.

We should be more generous about ourselves and other people around us.

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We should give our love to others.

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>> We should show our love to others.