If you could eliminate one weakness or limitation in your life, what would it be?

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There are so many things that I do not like about myself.

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I am a bit selfish.

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I lose my temper often.

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>> OR: I am a short tempered person.

I am not warm-hearted person, actually a cold person.

>> I am not a warm-hearted person, in other words a cold-hearted one.

I don’t express well.

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I’m not humorous.

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I’m eager to win in any competitions and it is sometimes excessive.

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I’m generous to myself, but a bit harsh to others.

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I get easily upset when my interests are infringed.

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We all have our strengths and weakness.

>> We all have our strengths and weaknesses.

No one is perfect.

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The important thing is let our strengths dominate us and keep our weakness from growing further.

>> The important thing is let our strengths dominate us and keep our weaknesses from growing further.

In addition, people are judged based on how they appear and behave to others regardless of what their true selves are.

>> In addition, people are judged based on how they appear and behave to others regardless of what their true selves are.

>> OR: In addition, people are judged based on how they look and behave towards others regardless of who they really are.

Unless we express, no one will strive to find out our real hidden values.

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People are already busy with their own business.

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They only believe what they see.

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They are not willing to bother themselves with reading our mind.

>> They are not willing to bother themselves to read our minds.

We cannot complaint about the current social phenomena.

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The world is moving so fast these days.

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We have to keep up with the times.

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>> OR: We need to keep up with the times.