If you could eliminate one weakness or limitation in your life, what would it be?

Good day Sir [이름]!

Happy Friday.
Thanks for your composition.

I hope that you will always be happy.

And that you will have a great weekend ahead of you.

We should be strong when dealing with difficulties.

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Teacher Nina

It is an interpersonal skill that I want to improve.

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The social skill is one of the most important factors to succeed in this world.

>> The social skill is one of the most important factor to succeed in this world.

It doesn’t matter how brilliant you as an individual are.

>> It doesn’t matter how brilliant you are as an individual.

In modern society, we need work together on a team. 

>> In modern society, we need work together as a team. 

Nothing can be achieved by working by yourself.

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The most critical asset you need to have is human network.

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Whenever you are in trouble or joy, you need someone who can share the feelings with you.

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We as a human being can be hurt the most by the broken relationship with others, not by loss of money or a failure in achieving something.

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If you lose money or go bankrupt, there is still a change to recover and stand on your feet.

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However, you are betrayed and disappointed at someone, it would last long.

>> However, you are betrayed and disappointed by someone, it would last long.

There are some people who are always loved by others.

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He/she has a wonderful personality.

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People feel happy only by being with him/her.

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If he is in a difficult situation, everybody will be willing to help him/her.

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He/she wouldn’t be lonely anywere.

>> He/she wouldn’t be lonely.