If you could exchange lives with someone, who would it be and why? (in 3-4 sentences)
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Hi [이름]!
That\'s a very interesting composition. ^^
I am happy about how confident you are about yourself.
It\'s a very good thing!
You were able to do swimming, though.
That\'s also a great sport.
But if you really could become a football player for a day, that would be cool too.
~~t. Ally
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I am not envious of people who are handsome or smart or rich, because I don’t so lack in those aspect.
>> I do not envy people who are handsome, smart or rich because I don\'t lack in those aspects.
Because I am not good at any kind of sports, I always envy athletic people.
>> But because I am not good at any kind of sports, I always envied athletic people.
If I were more athletic in my childhood days, I could join many activities and I would become more confident.
>> If I were more athletic in my childhood days, I could\'ve joined many activities and I would\'ve become more confident.
Yes! I’d like to exchange lives with any football player, if I could.
>> CORRECT!
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