If you could exchange lives with someone, who would it be and why? (in 3-4 sentences)

2018-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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If you could exchange lives with someone, who would it be and why? (in 3-4 sentences) I am not envious of people who are handsome or smart or rich, because I don’t so lack in those aspect. Because I am not good at any kind of sports, I always envy athletic people. If I were more athletic in my childhood days, I could join many activities and I would become more confident. Yes! I’d like to exchange lives with any football player, if I could.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!


That\'s a very interesting composition. ^^

I am happy about how confident you are about yourself.

It\'s a very good thing!

You were able to do swimming, though.

That\'s also a great sport.

But if you really could become a football player for a day, that would be cool too.


~~t. Ally




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I am not envious of people who are handsome or smart or rich, because I don’t so lack in those aspect.

>> I do not envy people who are handsome, smart or rich because I don\'t lack in those aspects.


 Because I am not good at any kind of sports, I always envy athletic people.

>> But because I am not good at any kind of sports, I always envied athletic people.


 If I were more athletic in my childhood days, I could join many activities and I would become more confident.

>> If I were more athletic in my childhood days, I could\'ve joined many activities and I would\'ve become more confident.


 Yes! I’d like to exchange lives with any football player, if I could.

>> CORRECT!



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