If you could FLY for just ONE DAY, what would you do and where would you go?
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I want to go to Japan if i could fly for just one day.
>>> Correct!
>>> I want to go to Japan if I could fly for just one day. (CAPITALIZATION)
Because, I am thinking about that coutry\'s food when i go to travel.
>>> This is because I always consider the food when I travel.
I heared that in Japan, there are many kind of delicious food.
>>> I heared that in Japan, there are many kinds of delicious food.
And it takes just 1hour to go to Japan from Korea.
>>> Also it only takes an hour to go to Japan from Korea.
That\'s why i could enjoy there enough.
>>> That\'s why I would definitely enjoy there.
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