If you could get a robot to help you with one chore or task, what would it be? Why?

2019-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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If you could get a robot to help you with one chore or task, what would it be? Why? If I have a robot, I will order it to clean and arrange my room in my own way. I am living with my parents, so sometimes my mother cleans and arranges my room in her own way. So I often get in trouble when I have to hurry to go out and find my stuffs. It gets be worse when she also cannot remember where it is.

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If you could get a robot to help you with one chore or task, what would it be? Why?

If I have a robot, I will order it to clean and arrange my room in my own way.

>>> CORRECT

OR: If I have a robot, I will order it to clean and arrange my room the way I like it.

I am living with my parents, so sometimes my mother cleans and arranges my room in her own way.

>>> CORRECT

OR: I am living with my parents, so sometimes my mother cleans and arranges my room the way she likes it

So I often get in trouble when I have to hurry to go out and find my stuffs.

>>> So I often have a hard time finding my stuffs when I\'m in a hurry because she\'s the one who rearranged my room.

It gets be worse when she also cannot remember where it is.

>>> It will even be worse when she cannot remember where she placed it.

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