If you could get rid of one season of the year, what season would you get rid of? Why?
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If I can get rid of one season of the year, I want to get rid of winter.
First, productivity is very low in winter, because vegetables and grains are usually not able to grow in the winter.
Second, because it is cold, heating costs a lot. It is a very bad case in our country where there are no resources.
Finally, because I have cold allergies, I can't do outdoor activities, so I hate winter even more.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mr. [이름]!(\",)
We don\'t have winter in the Philippines so I\'d like to experience it maybe once.(\",)
~T. Lynn
If I can get rid of one season of the year, I want to get rid of winter.
>> correct!
First, productivity is very low in winter, because vegetables and grains are usually not able to grow in the winter.
>> correct!
Second, because it is cold, heating costs a lot. It is a very bad case in our country where there are no resources.
>> correct!
Finally, because I have cold allergies, I can\'t do outdoor activities, so I hate winter even more.
>> correct!
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