If you could give any gift in the world, what would you give and to whom?

2015-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I wish I could give a wonderful house, a park or a private air plane to my wife, my daughter and my parents as gifts. Money will be a fantastic gift as well because you can buy most of things you want. However, if you can afford financially and mentally to give gifts to someone, you should take care of the people around you rather than try to help others who are on the other side of globe. Better is a neighbor that is near than the brother that is distant. What to give is not a matter. It is the thoughts that count. The receivers do not expect you to give expensive gifts. Just a small token of appreciation will be enough and they will be touched by your thoughts. Have you ever given gifts to your parents and friends whom you owe and should pay back for their hospitality, support, and love given to you? We often take what we have for granted and become realizing the value of them when they are gone away. Let's begin expressing our gratitude to our valuable people with a small now.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Sir [이름]!

Thanks for your sending your composition.

I hope that you will be able to give those things to your love ones.
Think positive. You are a hardworking person, so I guess it will happen in the future.

You made me realize to show my love and appreciate to the people I value as often as I can.

Have a great day.

Teacher Nina


I wish I could give a wonderful house, a park or a private air plane to my wife, my daughter and my parents as gifts.

>> I wish I could give a wonderful house, a park or a private airplane to my wife, my daughter and my parents as gifts.

>> OR: I wish I could give my wife, my daughter and my parents presents such as a wonderful house, a park or a private airplane.

Money will be a fantastic gift as well because you can buy most of things you want.

>> correct

However, if you can afford financially and mentally to give gifts to someone, you should take care of the people around you rather than try to help others who are on the other side of globe.

>> However, if you can afford financially and mentally to give gifts to someone, you should take care of the people around you rather than try to help others who are on the other side of the globe.

Better is a neighbor that is near than the brother that is distant.

>> correct

What to give is not a matter.

>> What to give doesn\'t matter.

It is the thoughts that count.

>> correct

The receivers do not expect you to give expensive gifts.

>> correct

Just a small token of appreciation will be enough and they will be touched by your thoughts.

>> correct

Have you ever given gifts to your parents and friends whom you owe and should pay back for their hospitality, support, and love given to you?

>> correct

We often take what we have for granted and become realizing the value of them when they are gone away.

>> We often take what we have for granted and realize the value of them when they are gone.

Let\'s begin expressing our gratitude to our valuable people with a small now.

>> Let\'s begin expressing our gratitude to our love ones now.

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