If you could go back in time, which age would you return to and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am satisfied with my current work and daily life. The freedom from money and time is most important in life , and i am living the most free life now than anyother time. However if i can use timemachine just one time, i would go back 10 years ago when bitcoin was very cheap and i will buy bitcoin with all my money.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jack!
Thank you for your thoughtful answer! I appreciate how you expressed satisfaction with your current life — it shows a strong sense of contentment and confidence. Your perspective on freedom being the most valuable part of life is truly admirable, especially coming from someone with your level of experience.
~Teacher Cathy
I am satisfied with my current work and daily life. The freedom from money and time is most important in life , and i am living the most free life now than anyother time.
>>I’m very satisfied with my current work and daily life. For me, having freedom, both financially and in terms of time, is the most important thing, and I feel that I’m living more freely now than at any other point in my life.
However if i can use timemachine just one time, i would go back 10 years ago when bitcoin was very cheap and i will buy bitcoin with all my money.
>>However, if I could use a time machine just once, I would go back about ten years, when Bitcoin was still very cheap. I would invest all my money in it.
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