-If you could go back in time, would you study something different?- (^-^)
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course I will. I like my major a little but I want to try about economic things or management. There are also difficult and very annoying, hard to find job. Despite this, there are more chance to meet new people and enjoyable activities. Because my major is usually stay alone and working alone also. I prefer more active and outdoor work. Even if my major have some relationships with others, there are too narrow and small people. If I could go back in time, I\'d study more active subject.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! Thank you for your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate it. ^ ^
I myself would do the same. I always wanted to be a doctor, but was not able to pursue it. Given the chance I would take up a medical course and study really hard for it. ^^
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I like my major a little but I want to try about economic things or management.
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There are also difficult and very annoying, hard to find job.
>>CORRECT
Despite this, there are more chance to meet new people and enjoyable activities.
>>Despite this, there are more chances to meet new people and have enjoyable activities.
Because my major is usually stay alone and working alone also.
>>Because my major is usually being alone and working alone.
I prefer more active and outdoor work.
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Even if my major have some relationships with others, there are too narrow and small people.
>>Even if my major have some relationships with others, we get to meet only a few people.
If I could go back in time, I\'d study more active subject.
>>If I could go back in time, I\'d study more on interesting matters that involve activity and dealing with people.
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