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2019-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Shelly

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These days are so many people don’t want marry. They have a different reason. When I was young age everybody wants to get married. I was too. I was lucky one man are living 39years. When we getting older our relationship getting stronger. Which is blessing each other’s.. If someone doesn’t love me I can not love either. The world are people getting divorce percentages getting worse.

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These days are so many people don’t want marry.
>>>These days many people don\'t want to get married.
They have a different reason.
>>> They have different reasons.
When I was young age everybody wants to get married.
>>> When I was young everybody wants to get married.
 I was too.
>>> I also want to
I was lucky one man are living 39years.
>>> I was lucky living with the man I love for 39 years.
 When we getting older our relationship getting stronger.
>>> While we get older our relationship is getting stronger.
Which is blessing each other’s.. 
>>> We are a blessing to each other.
If someone doesn’t love me I can not love either.
>>> If someone doesn\'t love me I can not love that person either.
The world are people getting divorce percentages getting worse.
>>> The percentage of people getting divorced around the world is getting higher.

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