If you could go on a vacation on different country where would go?
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It is exciting to travel.
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I was planning to go to America on October or November this year.
>> CORRECT
This plan has been moved up.
>> This plan has been approved.
I am going to go to America from August 22 to September 11.
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It is too short time to travel LA,LasVegas,Grand canyon..to Niagara Fall, New York...
>> It is a short time period to be able to travel LA. Las Vegas, Grand Canyon. to Niagara Falls to New York.
We are going to travel freely.
>> CORRECT.
(We -> my husband,me, my eldist sun, except the youngest son.)
>> My husband, my eldest son, and I. But, except my youngest son.
We are planning to use airbnb,rental cars,local planes.
>> We are planning to use air bnb, cars and local planes.
I want to go to Eastern Europe next time.
>> I also want to go to Eastern Europe next time.
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