If you could go on a vacation with your closest friend and you were in charge of planning, where wou
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If I go on vacation with my closest friend, I want to go to a place where I can fully heal and rest.
Because my friend and I have been busy and we want to get out of the complicated modern society a lot.
Well, I think the country will be decided by Singapore.
Singapore has good security, and there are many very good hotels where travelers can travel and rest fully. Also, my friend and I like to swim, and my mother who has been to Singapore said that there is a very nice hotel and there is a pool wiht a nice view of the hotel at the top. SO, we want to go there and swim and rest well.
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Hi!
Wow! Thank you for sharing your answer with me.
Singapore is such a nice place to go to for a vacation- especially for healing and resting.
I hope that you and your closest friend can go there soon. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
If I go on vacation with my closest friend, I want to go to a place where I can fully heal and rest.
>> CORRECT.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: If I could go on vacation with my closest friend, I’d choose a place where we could completely relax and recover.
Because my friend and I have been busy and we want to get out of the complicated modern society a lot.
>> My friend and I have been very busy, and we really want to escape the stress of modern life.
Well, I think the country will be decided by Singapore.
>> Well, I think we’ll choose Singapore.
Singapore has good security, and there are many very good hotels where travelers can travel and rest fully.
>> Singapore is a safe country with many excellent hotels where visitors can relax and enjoy themselves.
Also, my friend and I like to swim, and my mother who has been to Singapore said that there is a very nice hotel and there is a pool wiht a nice view of the hotel at the top.
>> Also, my friend and I enjoy swimming. My mother, who has been to Singapore, told me about a beautiful hotel with a rooftop pool that has a great view.
SO, we want to go there and swim and rest well.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: We’d love to stay there, take a swim, and just recharge.
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