If you could go stargazing, where would be the best place, and who would you go with?
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I want to see the star in \'Hangang\'.
l want to go with my mom, my friend, and my friend mom.
It will be very fun!!!!!!
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If you could go stargazing, where would be the best place, and who would you go with?
I want to see the star in \'Hangang\'.
>> I want to see the stars at the Han River.
l want to go with my mom, my friend, and my friend mom.
>> I want to go with my mom, my friend, and my friend\'s mom.
It will be very fun!!!!!!
>> CORRECT
OR >> I think it would be a lot of fun! It will be a lot of fun!
Han River would be a lovely place to go stargazing! You could also eat ramyeon while enjoying the stars.^^~
- Elly
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