If you could go to places like deserts or islands, would you get lonely? If you could take one perso
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I think I will get lonely. So if I could take someone, I will take my friend. Because we are communicate well each other and it is better than no one there.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy!
Loneliness will vanish if you are with someone who can truly make you happy. ^^
~Teacher Erin
I think I will get lonely.
>>CORRECT
So if I could take someone,
>>CORRECT
I will take my friend.
>>CORRECT
Because we are communicate well each other and it is better than no one there.
>>Because we communicate well with each other, it is better than being alone.
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