If you could have a conversation with any famous living person, who would you talk to?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to have a conversation with Ridley Scott.He is a famouse movie director.
He made \'Aline\' \'prometheus\' \'Thelma & Louis\' ...
I saw all about his movies and I\'m big fan of his.
And I always wonder after seeing his movies.
He usually talk about the first human being in space.
His movies are so difficult that are hard to understand.
His last human being movie said the human ancestor was a aline.
And they made a human but for some reasons, they want to kill human now.
I want to ask him why you show that Aline is human\'s ancestor and why they kill human .
I want to know his life philosophy and real meaning about his movies.
I could be realize some life attention not even just movies stories.
And I like phliosophy like life but I never did so I want to talk with him.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
I can see your curiosity about R. Scott\'s movies. He is really artistic and imaginative with his stories. I hope you meet him someday. Check the spelling of words you have used in the sentences. Keep on learning! ^^
I can see your curiosity about R. Scott\'s movies. He is really artistic and imaginative with his stories. I hope you meet him someday. Check the spelling of words you have used in the sentences. Keep on learning! ^^
~T. Maine
>> Correct.
He is a famouse movie director.
>> He is a famous movie director.
He made \'Aline\' \'prometheus\' \'Thelma & Louis\' ...
He made \'Aline\' \'prometheus\' \'Thelma & Louis\' ...
>> He made the movies, \"Aline\", \"Prometheus\", Thelma & Louis.\"
I saw all about his movies and I\'m big fan of his.
I saw all about his movies and I\'m big fan of his.
>> I saw all his movies and I\'m a big fan of his.
And I always wonder after seeing his movies.
And I always wonder after seeing his movies.
>>Correct.
>> OR: And I always wonder after watching his movies.
He usually talk about the first human being in space.
He usually talk about the first human being in space.
>> He usually talks about the first human being in space.
His movies are so difficult that are hard to understand.
His movies are so difficult that are hard to understand.
>> His movies are so difficult to understand.
His last human being movie said the human ancestor was a aline.
His last human being movie said the human ancestor was a aline.
>> His last human being movie said that human ancestors were aliens.
And they made a human but for some reasons, they want to kill human now.
And they made a human but for some reasons, they want to kill human now.
>> And they made humans but for some reason, they wanted to kill the human race in the present.
I want to ask him why you show that Aline is human\'s ancestor and why they kill human .
I want to ask him why you show that Aline is human\'s ancestor and why they kill human .
>> I want to ask him why he showed the alien was a human ancestor and why they killed humans.
I want to know his life philosophy and real meaning about his movies.
I want to know his life philosophy and real meaning about his movies.
>> I want to know his life\'s philosophy and the real meaning of his movies.
I could be realize some life attention not even just movies stories.
I could be realize some life attention not even just movies stories.
>> I could realize some life situations and not only movies.
And I like phliosophy like life but I never did so I want to talk with him.
And I like phliosophy like life but I never did so I want to talk with him.
>> And I like philosophy about life, but I never learned it. So I want to talk to him about it.
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