If you could have a conversation with any famous living person, who would you talk to? Why? And What

2014-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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If I meet a famous person, I want to meet Ban ki moon who is president of UN. He is my mentor. Because I think he realize his dream. I ask two question. first, When you fall into despair. How you overcome it? second. Do you have secret method to come true your dream?

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Hello there! First of all, thank you for making your homework. I appreciate your effort and time :) In my opinion, when a person is in despair, the best way to overcome it is to divert your attention to avoid negative thoughts. Exercising or going out with friends also helps. Talking about your problems will definitely make you feel better. Regarding your second question, I don\'t think there is any secret methods to make dreams come true. You just have to work hard and do your best:) I hope this helps. See you in class! ~Teacher Chelsea~ Here are some corrections: If you could have a conversation with any famous living person, who would you talk to? Why? And What If I meet a famous person, I want to meet Ban ki moon who is president of UN. >> If I were given a chance to meet a famous person, I want to meet Ban Ki Moon, who is the president of the UN.He is my mentor. Because I think he realize his dream.>> He is my idol because he dreams big and works hard for it. I ask two question. >> I have two questions for you. first, When you fall into despair. How you overcome it? >> First is that when you fall into despair, how do you overcome it?second. Do you have secret method to come true your dream? >> And do you have a secret method to make your dreams come true?  

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