If you could have a conversation with any famous living person, who would you talk to?
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I would like to meet and have a conversation with Hillary Clinton. I will ask her whether she has forgiven Bill Clinton for his affair from her heart. If not, I wonder what made her not divorce him. Would maintaining marriage without love still be so important and valuable for her because she would run for presidency? Would marriage be just social and legal binding or is it more than that? In addition, I’m also curious whether she would run for the next president of the United States. However, if I were really given an opportunity to have a conversation with a famous living person like the president of the United States or Korea, or a celebrity like Oprah Winfrey, I might be afraid of the situation rather than just being thrilled. If just saying hello will be fine and there will be nothing worry about. However, if the meeting would be more than that, what should I talk about. Do I have to ask him/her about his/her personal life or his/her view on various political issues?
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An awesome day to you Sir [이름]^^
How are you today? I hope that you are doing great.
I also want to meet Oprah Winfrey and ask her questions about music. Hihihi.
I hope that you will be able to meet a famous person someday.
I am sure that you will be really happy.
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Talk to you soon. Take Care!Teacher Nina
I would like to meet and have a conversation with Hillary Clinton.
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I will ask her whether she has forgiven Bill Clinton for his affair from her heart.
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>> OR: I will ask whether she has forgiven Bill Clinton because of his affair.
If not, I wonder what made her not divorce him.
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Would maintaining marriage without love still be so important and valuable for her because she would run for presidency?
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Would marriage be just social and legal binding or is it more than that?
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In addition, I’m also curious whether she would run for the next president of the United States.
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However, if I were really given an opportunity to have a conversation with a famous living person like the president of the United States or Korea, or a celebrity like Oprah Winfrey, I might be afraid of the situation rather than just being thrilled.
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If just saying hello will be fine and there will be nothing worry about.
>> If just saying \"hello\", it will be fine and there will be nothing to worry about.
However, if the meeting would be more than that, what should I talk about.
>> CORRECT!
Do I have to ask him/her about his/her personal life or his/her view on various political issues?
>> CORRECT!
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