If you could have an all-expenses paid trip to see any famous place, which tourist destination would
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If I have a chance to go anywhere fee free, I\'d like to go to Europe for 1 year. Europe has many different countries and I can have variety experiences. It must be amazing.
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Happy Friday, Ms. [이름]. I appreciate your composition. Europe sounds wonderful. ^^ See you in class! ^_^
~T.Avery
If I have a chance to go anywhere fee free, I\'d like to go to Europe for 1 year.
>> CORRECT
OR>> Given the chance to travel free of charge, I would love to visit Europe for a year.
Europe has many different countries and I can have variety experiences.
>> Europe has many different countries so I can have a variety of experiences.
It must be amazing.
>> CORRECT
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