If you could have any animal as a pet, which would you choose and why?
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I am growing fish at home and in my officel. The fish is guppy. I have 30 guppies in my office fishbowl. Guppies are very good at giving birth. I like keeping fish because they are much cleaner and quieter than dog or cat. And they are easy to care for and inexpensive/
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Hello!
Jack, I really enjoyed reading your answer! It’s impressive that you take care of so many guppies both at home and in your office, that shows your responsibility and patience. I admire how you notice their qualities, like being quiet, clean, and easy to care for. Even though you are very busy, you still make time to care for living things, and that is truly inspiring. You did your homework so well, and your sentences are improving steadily. Keep up this excellent work, Jack, I believe you can continue balancing your busy life with your passion for learning English.
~Teacher Cathy
I am growing fish at home and in my office.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I keep fish both at home and in my office.
The fish is guppy.
>>The fish are guppies.
I have 30 guppies in my office fishbowl.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I keep 30 guppies in the fishbowl in my office.
Guppies are very good at giving birth.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Guppies reproduce very easily.
I like keeping fish because they are much cleaner and quieter than dog or cat.
>>I enjoy keeping fish [이름]ce they are cleaner, quieter, and easier to manage than dogs or cats.
And they are easy to care for and inexpensive.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They are also low-maintenance and affordable to keep.
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