If you could have any super power, what would it be?

2020-05-05 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

I laugh well. It\'s not about trying to make a laugh, it\'s directed naturally That is my power and people like it. One day, I went to the photo studio to take a family photo, but I saw a lot of people talking to the photographer because I was so smiled that I never saw anyone who laughed so well. People who met me say that my laughter is the happiness virus. I have a positive mindset that doesn\'t make it difficult. These are my powerful strengths.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! You are right. I think that your extraordinary strength is to show your happiness. I feel happy talking to you. Keep having and spreading your positivity. Have a good day! ~~T.Dee

I laugh well.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: I laugh a lot.
It\'s not about trying to make a laugh, it\'s directed naturally

>>It\'s not about me trying to sound happy, it\'s just comes naturally.

That is my power and people like it.

>>CORRECT!
One day, I went to the photo studio to take a family photo, but I saw a lot of people talking to the photographer because I was so smiled that I never saw anyone who laughed so well.

>>One day, I went to the photo studio to have our family photo be taken. I saw a lot of people talking to the photographer because of the way I smiled. The said \"I never saw anyone who laughed so well.\"
People who met me say that my laughter is the happiness virus.

>>CORRECT!

>>OR: People who met me say that my laughter is infectious.
I have a positive mindset that doesn\'t make it difficult.

>>I also have a positive mindset and it doesn\'t make me think that life is difficult.
These are my powerful strengths.

>>CORRECT!

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