If you could have it your way, how would you like to spend your weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
If my energy is left, I would like to visit beatiful nature.
I hope to spend my time leisurely while having rich aroma coffee or taking a walk.
I want to recharge healthy from nature.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Ms. [Name]. Nature indeed has a healing power/ability.
If my energy is left, I would like to visit beatiful nature.
>>> If I had energy left, I would like to visit a beautiful nature.
I hope to spend my time leisurely while having rich aroma coffee or taking a walk.
>>> correct
I want to recharge healthy from nature.
I want to recharge healthy from nature.
>>> I want to recharge my health through nature.
>> OR: I want to recharge in a healthy way with nature.
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