If you could have it your way, how would you want to spend your weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I could have it my way, I will spend going to hairshop.
I have not got a perm since my pregnant.
So my hair needs to be trimmed about haircut and perm.
Especially, the hair style\'s change helps my mind to relax and pleasing.
It probably takes about 2 or 3 hours for perm. I need my honey\'s help to take care of my son utill that times.
But, lately most of hairshop and many stores are closed by coronavirus utill 5th April due to a social distancing by goverment\'s rule
And I don\'t also want to go there for a while.
But I want to go there in May for my hair trimming
Second, I want to meet my friends.
I used to meet them once a month than before.
We used to have a lunch and get a foot massage for our mind and body.
This is just a normal life. But this life is missing.
I hope to come back a normal life soon
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. We may have life changes these days, but this too shall pass.
-T .Beth
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>>> If I could have it my way, I will spend it going to the hair shop.
I have not got a perm since my pregnant.
I have not got a perm since my pregnant.
>>> I haven\'t gotten a perm since my pregnancy.
So my hair needs to be trimmed about haircut and perm.
So my hair needs to be trimmed about haircut and perm.
>>> So my hair needs to be trimmed and permed.
Especially, the hair style\'s change helps my mind to relax and pleasing.
>>> Especially, a hair style change could help my mind to relax and be pleased.
It probably takes about 2 or 3 hours for perm.
>>> It would probably take about 2 or 3 hours for a perm.
I need my honey\'s help to take care of my son utill that times.
>>> I need my honey\'s help to take care of my son during that time.
But, lately most of hairshop and many stores are closed by coronavirus utill 5th April due to a social distancing by goverment\'s rule
>>> But lately, most of hair shops and many stores are closed caused by the coronavirus until the 5th of April due to a social distancing by government\'s rule.
>>> But lately, most of hair shops and many stores are closed caused by the coronavirus until the 5th of April due to a social distancing by government\'s rule.
And I don\'t also want to go there for a while.
>>> correct
But I want to go there in May for my hair trimming.
>>> correct
Second, I want to meet my friends.
But I want to go there in May for my hair trimming.
>>> correct
Second, I want to meet my friends.
>>> correct
I used to meet them once a month than before.
I used to meet them once a month than before.
>>> I used to meet them once a month before.
We used to have a lunch and get a foot massage for our mind and body.
>>> correct
This is just a normal life. But this life is missing.
>>> correct
This is just a normal life. But this life is missing.
>>> This is just a part of my normal life which is now missing.
I hope to come back a normal life soon
>>> I hope to go back to this normal life soon.
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