If you could have it your way, where would you like to go on your next vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to go to Hawaii. Bacause when i was young, my first abroad trip was Hawaii.
And i had a lots of good memories in there. Snorkeling and coconut crab was my best memories. So i would like to go to Hawaii on my next vacation.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Elizabeth!
I want to go to Hawaii.
>>> correct
Bacause when i was young, my first abroad trip was Hawaii. And i had a lots of good memories in there.
>>> Because when I was young, my first abroad trip was in Hawaii and I had lots of good memories in there.
Snorkeling and coconut crab was my best memories.
>>> Snorkeling and coconut crab were my best memories.
So I would like to go to Hawaii on my next vacation.
>>> correct
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