If you could have the perfect birthday party, what would it be?

2024-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

학생이 쓴 원문

Usually I have my birthday ordinary. Morning I eat breakfast with my family, and in the evening go good restaurant eat dinner. Family give me a gift that i want. There is no any special. I never been birthday party. So I don\'t know birthday party. Birthday I want is go scenic place eat good food with my family.

강사 첨삭

Hi Eva, 

It sounds like you enjoy spending your special day in a simple and meaningful way with your family. Even without a big party, the idea of being in a beautiful place and enjoying good food with your loved ones is a wonderful way to celebrate. Your focus on the simple pleasures of life shows that you value the moments that truly matter. It’s great that you know what makes you happy on your birthday! 

~Teacher Cathy 

 

Usually I have my birthday ordinary. 

>>Usually, my birthday is ordinary. 

Morning I eat breakfast with my family, and in the evening go good restaurant eat dinner.  

>>In the morning, I eat breakfast with my family, and in the evening, we go to a good restaurant for dinner. 

Family give me a gift that i want.  

>>My family will give me a gift that I like. 

There is no any special.  

>>There is nothing special. 

I never been birthday party.  

>>I have never been to a birthday party. 

So I don\'t know birthday party.  

>>So I don\'t know what a birthday party. 

Birthday I want is go scenic place eat good food with my family. 

>>On my birthday, I want to go to a scenic place and eat good food with my family. 

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