If you could have three wishes that would come true, what would they be?
학생이 쓴 원문
My first wish is to end pandemic, I think it lasts too long. Secondly, I\'m sure you know this, let me get hired by Korean Air. And lastly, please let me have a girlfriend. Company, house again again again again. I\'m tired of life because it\'s a repetitive routine.
강사 첨삭
Hi Elic!
Don\'t worry. All those things will happen eventually. :)
Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
My first wish is to end pandemic, I think it lasts too long.
>> My first wish is for the pandemic to end because it\'s taking too long.
Secondly, I\'m sure you know this, let me get hired by Korean Air.
>>Second, I\'m sure you know this, I want to get hired by Korean Air.
And lastly, please let me have a girlfriend.
>> I wish to have a girlfriend.
Company, house again again again again.
>> My routine is usually going to the company and coming back home afterwards.
I\'m tired of life because it\'s a repetitive routine.
>>CORRECT
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