If you could have three wishes that would come true, what would they be? (No, you aan’t wish for mor
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If you could have three wishes that would come true, what would they be? (No, you don\'t wish for more wishes)
First, I want to have a lot of money.
Two, I want to be more intelligent than now.
Three, I always want to be happy and healthy.
If everything does what I expect, I will be happy.
But, we can know the value of life with having to mistakes and worry.
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First, I want to have a lot of money.
Two, I want to be more intelligent than now.
Three, I always want to be happy and healthy.
If everything does what I expect, I will be happy.
But, we can know the value of life with having to mistakes and worry
>> CORRECT
Two, I want to be more intelligent than now.
>> Second, I want to be more intelligent.
Three, I always want to be happy and healthy.
Next is that I always want to be happy and healthy.
If everything does what I expect, I will be happy.
>> If everything goes well as I want it to be then I will be happy.
But, we can know the value of life with having to mistakes and worry
>> But, we can know the value of life by making mistakes and worrying.
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