If you could have three wishes that would come true, what would they be? (No, you can’t wish for mor
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Even though if I could have three wishes that would be come true, I won\'t wish anything.
Because a greed will bring another greed, then it will be hard to live normally.
If I could have three wishes and it would be come true, then I will always think about the wishes.
Then it can make me stressful and unhealthy.
And after the wishes came true, I will always think about the wishes so it could be very harmful to me.
I believe that I won\'t do such things like this, but we couldn\'t know our future.
Because of these reasons, I won\'t wish anything even though I could wish something that would come true.
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Because a greed will bring another greed, then it will be hard to live normally.
If I could have three wishes and it would be come true, then I will always think about the wishes.
Then it can make me stressful and unhealthy.
And after the wishes came true, I will always think about the wishes so it could be very harmful to me.
I believe that I won\'t do such things like this, but we couldn\'t know our future.
Because of these reasons, I won\'t wish anything even though I could wish something that would come true.
Even though if I could have three wishes that would be come true, I won\'t wish anything.
>> Even though I can have three wished that would come true, I will still not wish for anything.
Because a greed will bring another greed, then it will be hard to live normally.
>> It is because it makes use greedy which can make life harder to live in.
If I could have three wishes and it would be come true, then I will always think about the wishes.
>> CORRECT
Then it can make me stressful and unhealthy.
>> Resulting, it can make me feel stressed and unhealthy.
And after the wishes came true, I will always think about the wishes so it could be very harmful to me.
>> After they come try, I will still think of the choices that I made so it will not be good for me.
I believe that I won\'t do such things like this, but we couldn\'t know our future.
>> CORRECT
Because of these reasons, I won\'t wish anything even though I could wish something that would come true.
>> Because of these reasons, I will not wish for anything.
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