If you could influence people like a celebrity does, how would you use it for the benefit of the pla
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I\'m sorry about homework.
>>I\'m sorry about the homework.
I watch this page today but I always ready to answer the homework.
>>I only saw this page today and I\'m always ready to answer the homework.
If you could influence people like a celebrity does, how would you use it for the benefit of the planet?
>>CORRECT!
My mother\'s job is Florist and horticulture therapist.
>>My mother is a Florist and a Horticulture Therapist.
So I grew up with trees and flowers and familiar with them.
>>So I grew up with trees and flowers and I\'m familiar with them.
The serious problems are air pollution and global warming.
>>The serious problems on earth are air pollution and global warming.
Then, If I could influence celebrity, I participate in ecology campaign about planting many trees.
>>If I could influence others like a celebrity, I will convince them to participate in ecology campaign about planting trees.
This immediate activity could effect the public\'s mind.
>>This kind of activity might convince the public to take care of the earth.
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