If you could invent one app, what kind of phone app would it be?
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I’d like to make an app which people can change to a person who really want to be. This app works temporary only. If it keeps permanently, it gets some troubles.
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Hello [이름]!
Wow that was really an interesting answer. You have a very creative mind! If this app was available in the app store, I\'d definitely download it. See you next week! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>I\'d like to make an app which can change people into a person they really want to be.
2. This app works temporary only.
>>This app will work only temporarily.
3. If it keeps permanently, it gets some troubles.
>>If it works permanently, it will experience some troubles.
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