If you could invite five people to a dinner party, who would they be? What is each guest like? Expla

2015-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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If I could invite fine people to a dinner party. I will invite team members in my office. One girl and 4 guys. Miss huang likes eating Japan food like sushi, Because she lived in japan for 1 year. I know our team director likes noodle. He does not likes eating meat or drinking beer. But our team manager prefers to eat meet than noodle or vegetable. He is a gourmand, So I’d better prepare enough food for him. He likes drinking beer too. Also, my supervisor likes eating meet, but he doesn’t like beer. He goes to church weekend regularly. The last one is our assistant manager. I think he can eat everything, He keeps a balanced diet.

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Good Evening, [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework. I wish to meet you soon! I think we can have a lot of things to share! :) I know you may have a lot of people in mind but you chose to be with these people in a dinner party. I think these people really made an impact in your life that it makes them really special for you. See you later!   Teacher Carmen ^^   If I could invite fine people to a dinner party. I will invite team members in my office. >> If I could invite five people to a dinner party, I will invite the team members in my office.   One girl and 4 guys. >> There will be one girl and 4 guys. Miss huang likes eating Japan food like sushi, Because she lived in japan for 1 year. >> Miss. [Name] likes eating Japanese food such as sushi, because she lived in Japan for a year. I know our team director likes noodle. >> Correct!   He does not likes eating meat or drinking beer. >> He does not like eating meat and drinking beer. But our team manager prefers to eat meet than noodle or vegetable. >> But our team manager prefers to eat meat more than eating noodles or vegetables.   He is a gourmand, So I’d better prepare enough food for him. >> He is a gourmand so I\'d better prepare enough food for him.   He likes drinking beer too. >> Correct! Also, my supervisor likes eating meet, but he doesn’t like beer. >> My supervisor also likes eating meat but he doesn\'t like drinking beer.   He goes to church weekend regularly. >> He goes to church on the weekends regularly. The last one is our assistant manager. >> Correct!   I think he can eat everything, He keeps a balanced diet. >> I think he can eat everything but he still keeps a balanced diet.

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