IF YOU COULD INVITE FIVE PEOPLE TO A DINNER PARTY, WHO WOULD THEY BE? WHAT IS EACH GUEST LIKE? H
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When I can invite my guest first I will invite my friend name seoyeongo.She is my favorite friend .She is really kind to me.I saw her when I was born and it was first time to meet friend.When I was born I played with little toy it has a sound so we like it.Now I can't see her many times because she is busy and I am busy too. Second I will invite my friend name chayeounlee she is my third grade best friend.She like to play with friend in school.Third is sukjun he is my cousun but we have same age he and I can play when we have meeting in my grandparent's house.Fourth is minseoun
zang she is doing math with me when I was 6 years old until 10 years old.She and I am good at math. Sometimes we don't like math but most she and I like math .Last friend is yuhakim she is my math friend too. I have 3 math freind we are really kind too each of friend I like them too. We do many parties and go water park or snow park.
It is fun too go with friends.This is about five friends who can go party.
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>>If i could invite five people to a dinner party, mt first guest would be my friend, Seoyeongo.
She is my favorite friend .
>>Correct
>>OR: She is my best friend.
She is really kind to me.
>>Correct
I saw her when I was born and it was first time to meet friend.
>>I met her when we were younger and that was the first time I met her.
When I was born I played with little toy it has a sound so we like it.
>>When we were younger, we played with our favorite toys.
Now I can\'t see her many times because she is busy and I am busy too.
>>But I can\'t see her anymore because we are both busy nowadays.
Second I will invite my friend name chayeounlee she is my third grade best friend.
>>The second person I would invite would be Cha Yeoun Lee who is my best friend when I was in third grade.
She like to play with friend in school.
>>She likes to play with me in school.
Third is sukjun he is my cousun but we have same age he and I can play when we have meeting in my grandparent\'s house.
>>The third person would be my cousin Sukjun. We have the same age and we play together when we go to my grandparents house.
Fourth is minseoun zang she is doing math with me when I was 6 years old until 10 years old.
>>The fourth person would be Minseoun Zang who enjoys Math just like me.
She and I am good at math.
>>Both of us are good in Math.
Sometimes we don\'t like math but most she and I like math .
>>But sometimes, we don\'t like Math.
Last friend is yuhakim she is my math friend too.
>>The last person would be Yuhakim who is my friend too.
I have 3 math freind we are really kind too each of friend I like them too.
>>I have three friends who love Math and I like them very much.
We do many parties and go water park or snow park.
>>We attend parties and we also go to the park or the snow park.
It is fun too go with friends.
>>It is fun to go there with friends
This is about five friends who can go party.
>>This are the people who can be my guest to a dinner party.
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