If you could invite five people to a dinner party, who would they be? What is each guest like?

If i invite five people to a dinner party. Maybe they are my friends and my family. Two peoples are live in Chung-ju. Their lives so far by me, but often contact me. Because I love them and they are too. Their my university friends. We are goes to sing cafe and drink beer in convenience store. We are almost met everyday. We are often ate pizza or Korea typical food. But we are sometimes met after graduated. Because I say earlier their lives so far by my home. Another people is my boy friend. He likes drinking with me. I often drink beer with him after work. Another peoples are my sisters. Her are my cousin. Their are eight years older than me and ten years older than me. She was married and has a two daughter. Her babies are so young and pretty. Another sister was married too. But she don’t have baby. Me and her are often met and ate our favorite food. That is my happiness of my life. Five peoples are my dear of [이름]e. This being so, I invite them.

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If you could invite five people to a dinner party, who would they be? What is each guest like?

If i invite five people to a dinner party. Maybe they are my friends and my family.

>>If I invite five people to a dinner party, maybe, it would be my friends and family.

Two peoples are live in Chung-ju.

>>Two people are living in Chung-ju.

Their lives so far by me, but often contact me.

>>They live so far from me, but they often contact me.

Because I love them and they are too.

>>Because I love them and they love me too.

Their my university friends.

>>They’re my university friends.

We are goes to sing cafe and drink beer in convenience store.

>>We go to a karaoke bar and drink beer at a convenience store.

We are almost met everyday.

>>We meet almost every day.

We are often ate pizza or Korea typical food.

>>We often eat pizza or some typical Korea food.

But we are sometimes met after graduated.

>>But, sometimes, we meet after our graduation.

Because I say earlier their lives so far by my home.

>>Because, like what I said earlier, they live so far from my house.

Another people is my boy friend.

>>Another person would be my boyfriend.

He likes drinking with me.

CORRECT!

or>>He enjoys having a drink with me.

I often drink beer with him after work.

CORRECT!

or>>I frequently have some beer with him after work.

Another peoples are my sisters.

>>The other people would be my sisters.

Her are my cousin.

>>And my cousin.

Their are eight years older than me and ten years older than me.

>>They are eight years and ten years older than me, respectively.

She was married and has a two daughter.

>>She is married and has two daughters.

Her babies are so young and pretty.

CORRECT!

or>>Her children are still very young and pretty.

Another sister was married too.

>>I have another sister who is also married.

But she don’t have baby.

>>But she doesn’t have a baby.

Me and her are often met and ate our favorite food.

>>Me and her often meet and eat most of our favorite foods.

That is my happiness of my life.

>>That is my happiness in life.

Five peoples are my dear of [이름]e.

>>These five people are very dear to me.

This being so, I invite them.

>>This being so, thus, I always invite them.