If you could lean a secret talent…?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.Jewel.
I attatched a picture.
Plz check the file.
I had a bad cold, again.
So I have to delay the next class.
See you next week.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Stella! I would like to fly, too! There\'s a Korean drama I watched and one of the main characters there had the ability to fly. ^^ Anyway,I hope you\'re doing great. See you in class next week. Get well soon!
~T. Jewel
If I could learn a secret talent, I would to learn flying to the sky.
>>If I could learn a secret talent, I would like to learn how to fly in the sky.
However, I don\'t know how to show it off.
>>CORRECT
Because I learn the secret, secretly, I don\'t think after showing it off, no more secret.
>>Because I learned the secret secretly, I don\'t think it would remain a secret after I show it off.
Remaining the skill as secret.
>>I want to keep the skill a secret.
When I feel stress or I\'m depressed, I\'ll spread my wings secretly.
>>When I feel stressed or depressed, I\'ll spread my wings in secret.
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