If you could learn martial arts, what martial arts would you like to learn and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are various martial arts like taekwondo, habkido,taekyeon and kickboxing in the world.
Taekwondo is one of my favorite arts but i am not familiar with it. We have learned it not only in school day but also in military service.
Through so many competiters are existed in that game for the winner, I once again would like to challenge it with my all heart like Kim[이름]ghee who was gold medalist in asian game but now became a police officer.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ethan!
Thank you for submitting your thoughts about the martial arts that you want to try.
I hope that you would be able to try and challenge yourself one more time with taekwondo.
I think that it would really be worth-it. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
Taekwondo is one of my favorite arts but I am not familiar with it.
Taekwondo is one of my favorite arts but I am not familiar with it.
>> CORRECT.
We have learned it not only in school day but also in military service.
>> We have learned it not only in school days but also in military service.
Through so many competiters are existed in that game for the winner, I once again would like to challenge it with my all heart like Kim[이름]ghee who was gold medalist in asian game but now became a police officer.
Through so many competiters are existed in that game for the winner, I once again would like to challenge it with my all heart like Kim[이름]ghee who was gold medalist in asian game but now became a police officer.
>> Though there are many competitors who exist in that game for the winner, I once again would like to challenge it with all my heart like Kim [이름]ghee who was the gold medalist in the Asian game but now became a police officer.
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