-If you could learn to speak another language, which language would you like to learn? Why?

2019-03-20 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

I would like to learn chinese. And also I wish my two daughters wanted to start to learn this language, which is getting popular as a global one world widely. Once I studied it by myslf with ebs radi program for two months, resulting in a failure. I didn\'t have enough time at that moment. If I can be given free time now, I still would love to to that. For me it can be my hobby. For two daughters it can a good source that can creat beautiful money in order to make their life easier and have more oppotunities in the future.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you so much for spending time in doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

Thank you for your thoughts on this one. There are actually benefits in learning other languages. It boosts brain power, improves memory, sharpens the mind and a lot more! And yes, I have to agree with you. It could also be a means for your daughters in the future to earn money. ^^

-Teacher Jedah


I would like to learn chinese.

>>Correct

>>I would like to learn Chinese. (don\'t forget to capitalize Chinese)

And also I wish my two daughters wanted to start to learn this language, which is getting popular as a global one world widely.

>>I also desire that my daughters would have interest in learning this language which is getting popular worldwide.

Once I studied it by myslf with ebs radi program for two months, resulting in a failure.

>>I tried learning the language by myself through a radio program for two months, but it didn\'t do me well. 

I didn\'t have enough time at that moment.

>>Correct

If I can be given free time now, I still would love to to that.

>>If I would have more free time now, I would still love to learn it. 

For me it can be my hobby.

>>Correct

For two daughters it can a good source that can creat beautiful money in order to make their life easier and have more oppotunities in the future.

>>For my two daughters it could be a tool for them to earn money and to have better opportunities in the future.

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