If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why?
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If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why?
I want to live in space because space has many stars
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Hi there my dear [이름]ho!
Thank you so much for answering the question. However, it would have been better if you had extended your answer.
Since the homework is writing a composition about the given topic, I wished you had added some supporting details.
Anyway, continue doing your homework.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee
If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why?I want to live in space because space has many stars
>>Correct! (Put the the appropriate punctuation mark at the end of the sentence.)
>>Or: I want to live in space because you can see a lot of stars in there.
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