If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why?

2014-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why? I want to live in space because space has many stars

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Hi there my dear [이름]ho!   Thank you so much for answering the question. However, it would have been better if you had extended your answer. Since the homework is writing a composition about the given topic, I wished you had added some supporting details. Anyway, continue doing your homework.   See you tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why?I want to live in space because space has many stars >>Correct! (Put the the appropriate punctuation mark at the end of the sentence.) >>Or: I want to live in space because you can see a lot of stars in there.    

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