If you could live anywhere else, where would that be?
학생이 쓴 원문
If i could live anywhere else, i still live in Korea.
I love korea food and all of cities are beautiful.
if i could choose city of the Korea, i hope live in Jeju island!
Sometimes i go to Jeju on vacation.
Jeju is island, so they are surronded sea.
so i can see the sea whenever i want.
That was beautiful!
If you have a vacation, i recommend go Jeju island!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Angela!
I am glad that youa re willign to write your thoughts. This cold also help you improve your skills. Please practice writing with correct punctuation and capitalization :). carry on.
Aki~
if i could choose city of the Korea, i hope live in Jeju island!
>>> If I could choose a city in Korea, that would be Jeju Island.
>>> If there is a place I could live in Korea, I hope to live in Jeju Island.
Sometimes i go to Jeju on vacation.
>>> Sometimes, I go to Jeju for vacation
Jeju is island, so they are surronded sea.
>>> Jejus is an island surrounded by water.
so I can see the sea whenever i want.
>>> CORRECT!
That was beautiful!
>>> CORRECT!
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