If you could live anywhere in the world for one year, where would you live and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Wow! I'm exciting to think about it.
I want to live in Paris if I can live elsewhere for a year.
There is a person I love.
I can see him everyday.
We will have dinner and take a walk in the park together.
We would be very happy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kate,
Thank you for doing your homework. See you again.
T. Tricia
Wow! I\'m exciting to think about it.
>> Wow! I am feel excited just thinking about it.
I want to live in Paris if I can live elsewhere for a year.
>> CORRECT!
There is a person I love.
>> The person that I love is there.
I can see him everyday.
>> CORRECT!
We will have dinner and take a walk in the park together.
>> CORRECT!
We would be very happy.
>> CORRECT!
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