If you could live in any city in the world, where would it be?
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Nowadays, I want to live in Honolulu of Hawaii. You know, there\'s known for a place that is a honeymoon. Even though I don\'t have a girlfriend, if I got a chance to live there, I wanna do that. Of course, I\'m looking for someone who is a wife material. Before doing that first, I should get hired any company like Korean Air, Jeju Air and company from [이름]gapore.
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Happy Monday, Elic! May this day be beautiful and mark the beginning of a wonderful and very productive week. Don\'t let anyone interfere what you can do.
Nowadays, I want to live in Honolulu of Hawaii.
>>> CORRECT.
You know, there\'s known for a place that is a honeymoon.
>>> You know, Hawaii is a place known for being a honeymoon destination.
Even though I don\'t have a girlfriend, if I got a chance to live there, I wanna do that.
>>> Even though I don\'t have a girlfriend, if I get a chance to live there, I want to do that.
Of course, I\'m looking for someone who is a wife material.
>>> Of course, I\'m looking for someone who is wife material.
Before doing that first, I should get hired any company like Korean Air, Jeju Air and company from [이름]gapore.
>>> Before doing that, I should get hired by any company like Korean Air, Jeju Air, or a company from [이름]gapore.
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